I recently had a few days off and made some progress: far more than half of Monitor is now finished and Milestone 2 is not too far away anymore.
Among others, I finished translating Renfry, the undertaker of Monitor, whose fire-related hearing loss has undergone a minor adaptation in German:
instead of “name”: “Flame? Oh, yes, we keep the fires going constantly!” (“Flame” does not rhyme to “Name” in German)
I have transcribed it as :
“Name”: “Dame? Oh, yes, we bury knights of both sexes here.”
So the faithfulness to the translation was knowingly given up to get the rhyme. I hope you would have kept it the same way 🙂